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Falling, Down, Under, by ~Tigahtoast:iconTigahtoast:



A dream of clouds, whispers of water
Droplets in the air, euphoria contained.
An emotion like flying, a feeling like
Love under cotton sheets, fleeting
Lights, flashing amongst the darkest
Hours of our loneliness, yearning for
That fulfilling moment, fingers dangling
Over the edge, going too far, too fast,
Exhilarating speed, adrenaline rushing
Into things, thinking, not leaping, but
Still having all the meaning of that one
Song, the notes winding like cold and warm
Fingers, together, locked in unison.
©2008-2009 ~Tigahtoast
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Author's Comments

Er, yes.

I...am not too wonderful at writing poetry, and this didn't work out quite perfectly. But it's close to what I wanted. I might try again tomorrow.

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:iconanimeluver16:
even if youuuu dont think i worked out, i like it :) your writing is so pretty jesse <333
i love it :)

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BREAKNECK BANDITZ
'We just sound good together.'
:iconanimeluver16:
welcomesss :D

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BREAKNECK BANDITZ
'We just sound good together.'

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